Thursday, January 31, 2013

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 21

In the performance of enhancing drugs, such as steroids should not be allowed in sports. In the present period now in today, many problems occur in people who are athletic can't do simple things because of steroids. For example such things like it confuse the hormones and the metabolism making your body the opposite of your sex. Mostly the primary tradition for improving in your performance is to keep on practicing harder. This shows commitment and consideration because it shows how much work you put into and also demonstrates how much you revel and have much passion for this sport. In conclusion steroids shouldn't be tolerated; people can make something good out of their self if they try.

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  1. When you explain that PEDs "confuse the hormones and the metabolism making your body the opposite of your sex," your writing begins to sound like a college student. Remember to work on following the chunks format. You can also improve your paragraphs by adding citations to specific facts.

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